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| − | {{Scenes/Universalis 1}}
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| | Alano had been having trouble keeping up all morning. The gash in his thigh ached and the strip of cloth he had wrapped around it was now soaked with the deep crimson colour of his blood. Will pursued a relentless pace and Alano fell farther and farther behind… | | Alano had been having trouble keeping up all morning. The gash in his thigh ached and the strip of cloth he had wrapped around it was now soaked with the deep crimson colour of his blood. Will pursued a relentless pace and Alano fell farther and farther behind… |
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| − | Not accustomed to a life of danger, Alano had enough trouble keeping from what sailors would call "whining". He knew that compared to them he was a weakling, they knew it as well, but at least the facade of mutual respect held things together. He paused once more to give his leg a rest and promised that this time he will ignore the pain, catch up with sailors, keep pace...
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| − | When a hairy, dog-like head appeared from one of the trees, he didn't believe his eyes. A part of his brain decided that it's too much, and so Alano stood breathless and motionless while a grinning beast silently approached him.
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| − | A loud bang of a pistol freed him from this stasis. The dog creature was lying a few yards away; its left eye, where the bullet entered the skull, was a bloody mess. A scent of burned powder spread in the air. Sudden rush of thoughts swarmed Alano's mind, as if trying to dominate his will: '''"What species is that thing? The powder got wet, it wouldn't have ignited. I think I screamed. Is it canidae or felidae? Is it even carnivora? Did I almost die? Is it edible?"'''
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| − | == Components record ==
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| − | | {{Component|[[Isle of Teeth]]|traits=sinister reputation, reefs and rocks surrounding}}
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| − | | {{Component|[[Will Bowyer, seadog]]|traits=''armed sailor'', experienced navigator, disrespects Alano, intolerant of weakness}}
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| − | | {{Component|Men|traits=disrespect Alano}}
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| − | | {{Component|[[Alano]], biologist|traits=wounded, lucky, disrespected by sailors, fascinated by dog things}}
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| − | | {{Component|[[Dog things]]|master=1|traits=ugly, nasty bite, fact: unknown species}}
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| − | | {{Component|Small rowboat}}
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| | == Bidding for the scene == | | == Bidding for the scene == |
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| | --[[User:GiacomoArt|GiacomoArt]] 04:32, 19 April 2009 (UTC) | | --[[User:GiacomoArt|GiacomoArt]] 04:32, 19 April 2009 (UTC) |
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| | === NeonWhite === | | === NeonWhite === |
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| | [[User:EvilCat|EvilCat]] 10:15, 19 April 2009 (UTC) | | [[User:EvilCat|EvilCat]] 10:15, 19 April 2009 (UTC) |
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| − | == Replies ==
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| − | === Neonwhite ===
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| − | * Location: Isle of Teeth {{C|1}}
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| − | * Time: Present (0 coins)
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| − | # Will and his men arrive on the island
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| − | # They head inland in search of a route to the high ground
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| − | # Alano starts to fall behind the rest of the group
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| − | * Will Bowyer ({{C|1}} to introduce)
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| − | * Men ({{C|1}} to introduce)
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| − | * Small rowboat {{C|1}}
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| − | * Alano, wounded {{C|2}}
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| − | * The Isle of Teeth {{C|3}}
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| − | ** Sinister reputation
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| − | ** Reefs and rocks surrounding
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| − | New coin count for Neonwhite: 25 - 12 {{=}} {{C|13}} left
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| − | [[User:Neonwhite|Neonwhite]] 12:08, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
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| − | === EvilCat ===
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| − | # Dog creature attacked Alano.
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| − | # A sailor shot the creature.
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| − | # Fact: the creature is of unknown species.
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| − | * Dog things (4 coins), master component
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| − | ** nasty bite, ugly
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| − | * Alano - new traits (4 coins, took over for 1 Coin):
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| − | ** biologist, lucky
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| − | ** disrespected by sailors (relationship trait, autotrait for Will and men: disrespect for Alano)
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| − | ** fascinated by the dog creature.
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| − | 12 - (3 + 4 + 4 + 1) {{=}} 0. Oops, no coins %)
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| − | [[User:EvilCat|EvilCat]] 15:07, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
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| − | === Neonwhite ===
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| − | * Will - new trait (1 coin):
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| − | ** intolerant of weakness
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| − | 13 - 1 {{=}} 12 coins left.
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| − | <End of Scene>
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| − | [[User:Neonwhite|Neonwhite]] 08:37, 22 April 2009 (UTC)
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